Somethings may be changed for better part of the story. Personalities, names, locations. Where characters are studying, how old they are, and so on forth. You can also critique the way I write character interactions, personalities and give me tips going foward. I'll try to listen as much as I can. Doing this for free, if I feel like doing, I'll do it. If not, I won't. Very simple. Don't expect +S tier writing. This is my first novel afterall.