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🖤 Chapter 2: The Flame That Wouldn't Fade
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"Some people call it madness.
Others call it fate."
The moment she stepped out of the throne room, the cold returned.
The doors shut behind her with a deep, echoing thud. And in that instant, the air turned hollow again — like the warmth had been stolen the second he was gone.
The maid beside her walked fast. Too fast, as though afraid even the corridor could burn her.
"That was reckless," the girl whispered, her voice sharp and hushed. She didn't meet Lira's eyes.
"I only spoke," Lira said quietly.
"You looked him in the face," the maid hissed. "No one does that. No one stares into the flame and walks away untouched."
Lira said nothing.
Because she had looked — and she hadn't burned.
No… she had felt something else entirely.
Like warmth.
Like being seen.
And even as they walked farther from him, something in her chest refused to quiet.
That night, she sat on the edge of her cold bed, her hands resting in her lap, the candlelight trembling on the walls. Her heart should have settled. But it didn't.
She could still feel his voice in her bones.
"You're not safe around me."
But she was still here.
She had been trained, assigned, and chosen to serve him.
Why was he pushing her away?
Suddenly, the air shifted.
A strange hush fell across her small chamber, pressing in on all sides.
And then she felt it.
Not the warmth of magic.
Not the gentle breeze of a castle draft.
No — this was different.
A chill.
Cold and sharp.
But familiar.
It brushed against her skin like invisible fingers — the same way it had in the throne room, just before he spoke.
Before he looked at her like she was something… different.
Now, it pulled at her again.
Like a whisper only she could hear.
She shouldn't have moved.
But she did.
She slipped out of her bed, opened the door with bare fingers, and stepped into the hallway.
The cold met her instantly — not in the air, but in her blood.
And with every step she took, the chill deepened. Not painful. Not even unpleasant. Just… his.
Not a direction. A pull.
Not footsteps. A presence.
She wandered through the quiet corridor, breathing shallow. The walls stretched endlessly, torch flames low and uneasy. She should have turned back. But something in her knew where to go, even if her mind didn't.
And then — she stopped.
He was there.
Not appearing.
Waiting.
He stood in the shadows, partially lit by the flickering firelight from the wall. His back was to her at first — shoulders stiff, hands clenched at his sides.
He turned slowly.
And when his eyes found her, they weren't just glowing. They were guarded.
"You shouldn't be here," he said darkly. "Not tonight."
"You brought me here," she said, breath low. "Didn't you?"
He didn't answer.
"Why do you keep pushing me away?" she asked. "I was assigned. I trained for this. I've followed the rules. I—"
"This job isn't for someone like you."
Her chest tightened.
"What does that mean?" she asked, voice sharp now.
"You don't understand what I am."
"Then explain it."
He looked away.
"You'll regret being here."
"Try me," she said.
He stepped forward then — just once — and she could see it in his eyes.
Fear.
Not of her.
For her.
"You won't survive this," he said quietly. "And I won't protect you when you don't."
And with that, he turned and disappeared into the dark.
Leaving her cold, breathless, and more determined than ever.