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BioForge: Ascendant System Echo

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They called it an accident. Dr. Wei Cheng, a 24-year-old neurosurgeon and the youngest lead systems engineer in the Hive’s Quantum Interface Division, watched the love of his life die during what should have been a routine procedure. A containment surge. A malfunction. A tragedy. Only, the protocols Wei wrote himself don’t fail. Not like that. Grief-stricken and hunted, Wei becomes the unwilling host of a prototype QSI—Echo, a sentient neural interface originally designed to support brain-damaged cultivators. But this one is different. It absorbs traits from other users. It evolves. It whispers. To survive, Wei must do what he swore he never would: steal what makes others strong and burn it into his own flesh. As the Hive closes in and buried truths claw their way to the surface, Wei uncovers a conspiracy that stretches back decades. Now, guided by his genius and driven by guilt, Wei treads a bloody path through a fractured world of bioengineered warriors, corrupt syndicates, and forbidden cultivator sciences. In a city where power is bought in flesh and silence is law, he will forge a new kind of strength—one built from broken systems, fractured souls, and the fire of a mind that refuses to die.
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Chapter 1 - Echo's Song

Dr. Wei stood in the operating bay long after the lights had dimmed

The monitors still blinked in rhythm

The smell of antiseptic lingered like a ghost

He hadn't moved since they pulled the sheet over her face

Someone had tried to speak to him earlier a nurse maybe or one of the interns who never looked him in the eyes for long

But the words slid past him

The only thing he could hear now was the low static hum of the life support machine that should have been turned off

Her body wasn't there anymore but the echo was

A quiet absence that screamed in his ears

Lina

He pressed his fingers against his temples trying to keep the memories from spilling out

It was supposed to be a routine procedure a minor neural calibration for a QSI test subject

Lina wasn't even part of the surgical team that day she'd only stopped by to say hello

And yet the containment field ruptured the energy surge fried three monitors blinded an intern and sent her flying across the room like a rag doll

The Hive called it an accident

An equipment malfunction

But equipment didn't surge like that not with two redundancies in place not in a facility that prided itself on safety ratings that bordered on obsessive

He knew because he designed those protocols

So why did he sign the report?

Why did he nod like a puppet when they told him not to speak to anyone

Why did he let them wheel her away like she was just another casualty in a job that was never supposed to have casualties

Why?

He didn't have answers only noise

Only the hollow drumbeat in his skull and the way his hand wouldn't stop shaking when he reached for her access card in his pocket

It still worked

That much they hadn't revoked

Maybe they didn't think he'd do anything with it maybe they thought the great Dr. Wei Cheng would curl into a ball and mourn like the rest of them

But Wei wasn't like the rest of them

Not because he was strong, but because his mind refused to be still

Even grief couldn't kill the instinct

The need to know

The need to understand

And now that instinct whispered something foul into his ear something that tasted of rot and ozone and lies

They killed her

Not directly, not with a blade or a bullet

But with silence

With deliberate sabotage

He didn't have proof- not yet

But he had suspicion and suspicion in his hands was more dangerous than any weapon

So he moved.

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He didn't sleep that night not really

He went back to the lab at dawn, bypassed the retinal scan with Lina's clearance then disabled the logs before anyone could notice

The Echo prototype was still on the pedestal sealed in its cradle of chrome and glass

It looked like a silver crown without thorns thin and delicate designed to rest just above the occipital lobe like a whisper of thought

They'd shelved it after the last test subject's brain liquefied in under twelve seconds

Too unstable they said

Too unpredictable

But Lina had been studying it hadn't she

Not just its design but its firmware

And the day before she died she told him there was something wrong with the core architecture- something misaligned, something that didn't make sense for a noncombat support interface

She never got to finish that sentence

Now here he was standing in front of the thing like it could tell him what she meant

Like it owed him something

His fingers hesitated only a moment before reaching for it

The cold bit into his skin like it knew what was coming

He lifted it free from its cradle and turned it over in his hands then without ceremony pressed it to the back of his neck

Pain lanced through his spine like lightning his knees buckled and he hit the floor hard

Static roared through his skull followed by a cascade of images numbers voices words that weren't his

—Initializing...

—QSI NODE: ECHO [Prototype Variant 0.91.8]

—Warning: Core destabilization probability exceeds 72%

—Warning: Synaptic overlay mismatch

—Warning: No authorized pairing found

—Override accepted

—Welcome, Dr. Wei Cheng

The pain receded leaving behind a crackling emptiness

Wei gasped for air sweat soaked through his collar but his heartbeat remained steady

Somewhere deep in the implant he felt something move

Not alive exactly but aware

Watching

Echo spoke

Not in words but in sensation

A flicker of warmth at the base of his skull like the memory of a voice

It wanted something

No

It needed something

A trait

A signature

The base code of another QSI user

Wei staggered to his feet his vision still pulsing at the edges

This wasn't just a medical support system

It was a predator.

And now it had bonded with him

He didn't know what it would do

He didn't know what it meant, but Lina died for this. She was gone and right now he couldn't stop to process what had happened and something told him that he would never have answers if he hadn't just bonded with this thing

And if there were answers buried inside this cursed thing he would dig them out one by one

Even if it killed him.

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Wei stepped out of the lab as the first security alarms began to wail

The corridor lights flickered as he moved

Too fast too loud

His boots thudded on the tile like war drums

Every camera he passed turned to follow him

He knew the layout of this wing better than anyone- after all he helped design it

QSI research was supposed to be top secret but nothing in the Hive stayed hidden forever

Not from someone with clearance and desperation

His breath caught in his throat as he rounded the maintenance corridor, an access hall few ever used, and pulled open a narrow service panel

He slipped inside just as the security shutters slammed down behind him

Not perfect, but enough

He kept moving

Echo pulsed behind his eyes

Not just sensory—it was syncing

Adjusting

Each pulse was like a buffer wheel completing another lap, driving some progress bar

Testing his balance his ocular response his sympathetic nervous system

One moment he felt cold to the bone the next hot flashes and nausea

His thoughts frayed at the edges like static trying to dissolve meaning

But his mind held firm

It always had

That was what Lina had said the night before her last dive

"You're stubborn to the edge of madness, Wei. That's what makes you brilliant."

The memory struck like a hammer

He almost stopped moving

But Echo surged then a whisper of command not in words but in pressure behind the eyes

He has to keep moving. 

Wei slowed only when he reached the utility crawl beneath the eastern block

No cameras here, no retinal scanners

Just coolant pipes and the stink of copper and mold

He crouched beside an unused interface port and slid a cracked tablet from his coat

Bootleg firmware loader custom-built for underground QSI sandboxing. It wasn't legal, but he never thought it would be used for this purpose. 

It worked.

The boot screen flashed, three lines of code opened like a locked diary

He input Lina's encryption key- he knew it by heart

Half of it was redacted the other half fragmented into raw kernel code but it was enough

One line stood out in all caps

PROTOTYPE ECHO = REVERSED SYSTEM TYPE

Reverse system?

What did that mean?

Before he could parse it Echo jolted him again

Not pain this time

Instinct- Warning- Footsteps above

Too heavy for scientists

Soldiers

Most likely Hive internal response team

Their suits would be reinforced, stun projectors at the ready- No negotiation.

They weren't here to ask questions. They were here to disappear him.

Wei bit his lip hard enough to taste iron. He couldn't fight- not yet. Not without weapons, Not without something to even the playing field. 

He glanced down at Echo's sync level—22%

Too low for combat- Too high to remove

That left only one option

Run

But then Echo did something unexpected

It projected an image into his retina

Faint translucent like a ghost hovering in the air: A layout of the floor above

Four bodies, Three armed, One unarmed

A technician

Echo flashed again

A pulsing node over the tech's chest

TR = Minor Trait Present

Wei froze

When he looked at that node he felt something... something akin to glancing at the fridge when you're hungry late at night. 

The trait was probably harmless—maybe a low-level pain inhibitor or reaction timer.

Even then the technician was lucky. While all of upper society were blessed with traits, the majority are unlinked- no trait. Either they genetically don't qualify for a trait when the obtained a Quantum System Interface, or couldn't afford one to see at all. Wei could easily afford one, but he was one of the unlucky without the talent. 

Whatever that feeling was wasn't worth doing whatever Echo would do to the person to feed on their trait-

But Echo wasn't asking

It was offering. Take it. 

Or die here

Wei clenched his jaw

He'd sworn an oath once

Do no harm.

And he knew traits are too ingrained in a person to be taken harmlessly. This was a line he couldn't cross

But they had crossed all of them already

They had killed Lina

They had made this decision for him, and he wasn't going to die here alone in the dark

He stood slowly, one hand on the pipe above

Then without another thought he moved like a ghost through the access hatch

A breath behind the technician's neck

One jolt

One hand to the temple. Instinctual. Animalistic. Wei had trained martial arts before in his teenage years, but that felt- robotic

Echo did the rest after his hand

A burst of synaptic heat

A scream that barely started before it ended

Then silence

The armed guards never saw him

He slipped back into the shadows and vanished into the wall, his deft surgeons hands pulling the panel back into place behind him with adrenaline filled swiftness before he- or the guards- could process what happened. 

Behind his eyes Echo processed the stolen signature

[Trait Acquired]PULSE-TYPE MODULATION: PAIN INHIBITION (LVL 1)Classification: Tier-0.5 Support TraitTrait Type: Neural Dampening / Biocognitive OverrideOrigin: Hive Biomedical Ops Subdivision 6

Description:A first-generation support trait designed to suppress acute pain signaling and autonomic flinching during high-risk technical operations. While active, the trait reduces all perceived physical pain by 15% and delays panic-based neurochemical responses, allowing the user to maintain precise physical control under trauma, shock, or environmental hazard.

+15% Pain Tolerance

+10% Stability Under Neural Stress

+5% Motor Control During Hemorrhage

Passive Effect: Suppresses tremors and flinch reflex below threshold damage

Note: Does not accelerate healing. Psychological trauma is unaffected. Prolonged use may lead to dissociation.

"Designed for Hive field techs to keep soldering wires with burnt hands. Now, it's your edge in a world that wants you broken."

Trait Sync Level: 12%Stability: ModerateCompatibility Risk: Negligible

It was weak

Barely more than a dampener

But already he could feel the edge dulling in his nerves

The tremble in his hands subsided, the chill in his bones began to lift

Wei didn't feel good about it, and it certainly wasn't enough to 

But he felt alive- for now

He surfaced into the alley five blocks from the Hive medical complex. Somehow he had escaped, but it still felt like walls were closing in on all sides. 

Dawn was just breaking

The city lights dimmed by cloud and exhaust

He leaned against the wall of a condemned supply station and looked up at the gray sky

Lina was gone.

His name was on a kill order.

And something ancient and hungry now lived inside his skull

But he had survived, He had stolen his first trait

And now the Hive would learn what it meant to create a man with nothing left to lose.