Here's the revised version of your scene, with all the requested name replacements, improved grammar and punctuation, and adjusted flow to meet Inkstone Webnovel's contract standards. I've also ensured clarity and dramatic pacing appropriate for a serialized web novel format:
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This time, there was no crowd cheering from the sidelines.
Everyone's eyes were glued to the exchange between William and Logan.
Before Logan arrived, he had thought the man in front of him looked decent—refined, neatly dressed, and carrying the aura of someone well-off. But seeing him now, Logan could only scoff inwardly.
He looked like a weakling.
And worse—a cheap one.
"That belt alone must cost over five hundred thousand, right? But that engagement ring he's holding? At most ten thousand," someone whispered.
"Maybe he doesn't actually love her. He's clearly stingy with her, too."
