Introduction
I entirely made {The idea of the story; the grammar, punctuation, rephrasing, and other technical and writing options were half done with help from chat GPT, and some web extensions like Grammarly}
On an autumnal day, Zeke packed his pieces of stuff as he finished his work shift for the day, it was time for him to go home. He changed in his locker from his working clothes to more sporty clothes. As walking across the streets he saw this man dressed up as a businessman who had a suitcase, that was assaulted and seemed to be threatened by 3 crooks, they had tattoos all over their face and hands. Zeke, an altruist man around 21 years old, tries to man up and run to them to scare them….He wasn't a great person or had many accomplishments in life. As he was interested in self-improvement learnings, he believed that the mind is not yet developed till 23-25 yo, stated or recurring to his generation. This implies that the never-ending attempt to search for a potentially healthy relationship will not occur till some later months/years, he had tried to date the girls but he didn't find any mature enough for him. Some of them even ghosted him. He was an average man trying to work a side job and go to a decent university adhering to a bachelor's degree in Data Science & Social Systems (B.A.)., as he did find himself immersed in a need for social skills.
He was thinking about that nothing could have gone wrong as he practice some martial art for self defence inside gym, cause he is an man that does both job and physical training. He didn't see any sort of weapon these crooks might have. Took the initiative and hoped inside to help.
Zeke strolled home from the gym on a cool autumn evening, reveling in the post-workout endorphin high. As he passed through the familiar neighborhood streets, a scene unfolded before him, unlike any day he had an encounter on his usual route. A group of men was menacingly targeting a well-dressed gentleman, they demanded money and belongings from him. (can you add here about the physic of Zeke, I was thinking he just started going to the gym and he doesn't have that sort of athlete physic, like he didn't acquired yet abs . but he was still working on having them. now he just a bit fit but not that much muscles)
'Only five of them?'(Zeke thinking) A cocky smirk played on Zeke's face, as he eyed the thugs. His gaze flickered to the businessman. Without a moment's pause, Zeke marched towards the group with confidence.
They tried to rob him but Zeke did not hesitate to help him. As he approached them he stood up for the businessman, he later found out that his name was James. Zeke wasn't sure that he could take them as they were 5 thugs. He struggled to fight them as it was a 1 v 5 fight. James took cover and called the police and they came fast, but not before blacking out. I couldn't win this fight but at least managed to stall time. The police took over the problem of the thugs, they took me to a nearby hospital. (Zeke hesitated a beat, doubt flickering across his mind. They were five, he was one. But the businessman's terrified gaze steeled his nerves)
He woke up in a sterile hospital room, the faint beeping of a nearby machine a welcome sound. The last thing he remembered was a nurse fussing over him. On the clock indicated 11am, i felt really lethargic. It was the next day, 2am, i was awake, and there was 2 people inside my room they wore masks. They unplug my electronic recovery devices.
"What are you doing?" Zeke's voice came out raspy, barely a whisper. He tried to push himself up in the bed, a jolt of pain shooting through his torso.
"You, mf, unplugged my machines! What the hell is going on?"
"Restrain him" (Thug 1)
Zeke thrashed against the restraints, but his weakened body was no match for their strength. He blacked out
'Last thing I can remember was that a nurse came and put me in a bed. I fell asleep again, then after some time I woke up in this place with a calm grassland.'